Hello my friends,
I'm a happy guy, so I like to hear funny things. I like Italian food, sea, go to the gym and meet new people. I'm from Saudi Arabia. I've been studying English for 9 months. I have two brothers and im in the middle of them. I love my family. I'm a good person.
This is a good start, Mohammed. This post has lots of information about you. Please add some visuals. Does 'I hope to be a good person' mean that you are not a good person now?
ReplyDeleteYou only have one post in your blog, Mohammed. Your other classmates have between 4 and 7 posts.
ReplyDeleteIt is difficult for me to give you feedback if there is little to read.
There are 10 errors in this short post. Can you find and fix them?